Brutal.

The author is intent on describing outfits and does it in a way that tells rather than shows. In fact, there’s a lot of telling going on (eg. “I’m startled by his sudden presence.”) and italics are used as a quick cheat to convey thoughts that would otherwise require more skill to…
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Esme Harlow
Roman Newell
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Nov 22, 2023
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Brutal.
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Written by Roman Newell
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Busy working on my novel, 20xx. I also talk about the writing journey on Substack. romannewell.substack.com.
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